[SPN-fic] Master of Puppets 1/8 - Repost

Alright, so I'm reposting the first chapter of Master of Puppets - followed by a couple of new chapters right away. New in this case means ooooold but newly altered and corrected ;) I've finished the third story of the series recently and am currently working on the fourth.

Originally, I started to work on the project with narya86, but we soon realized that she wasn't as passionately interested in progressing with the series as I. So I took over her characters (Sam and Meggie) and continued to write alone - from the showdown of Master of Puppets up to the current stories.
But alright, enough blah-blah-blah, we don't have time for any of that anyway ;) and on to the fic.

Also, I'd be really, really, really glad if you could give me some feedback this time.

Title:Master of Puppets
Chapters: 1/8
Timeline: Starts after 3x11, Mystery Spot
Rating: R mostly, I'd say. Definitely no NC-17 chapters in this story
Pairings: None yet in this part of the series, but implied het-pairings.
Summary: In Fayette, Mississippi, Dean and Sam investigate a lethal accident at a local puppet theater... But they're not the only ones who are trying to find out what's been going on.

( Master of Puppets - Chapter 1 )

[SPN-fic] Master of Puppets 2/8

Title:Master of Puppets
Chapters: 2/8
Timeline: Starts after 3x11, Mystery Spot
Rating: R mostly, I'd say. Definitely no NC-17 chapters in this story
Pairings: None yet in this part of the series, but implied het-pairings.
Summary: In Fayette, Mississippi, Dean and Sam investigate a lethal accident at a local puppet theater... But they're not the only ones who are trying to find out what's been going on.

( Master of Puppets - Chapter 2 )

[SPN-fic] Master of Puppets 3/8

Title: Master of Puppets
Chapters: 3/8
Timeline: Starts after 3x11, Mystery Spot
Rating: R mostly, I'd say. Definitely no NC-17 chapters in this story
Pairings: None yet in this part of the series, but implied het-pairings.
Summary: In Fayette, Mississippi, Dean and Sam investigate a lethal accident at a local puppet theater... But they're not the only ones who are trying to find out what's been going on.

( Master of Puppets - Chapter 3 )

[SPN-fic] Master of Puppets 4/8

Title: Master of Puppets
Chapters: 4/8
Timeline: Starts after 3x11, Mystery Spot
Rating: R mostly, I'd say. Definitely no NC-17 chapters in this story
Pairings: None yet in this part of the series, but implied het-pairings.
Summary: In Fayette, Mississippi, Dean and Sam investigate a lethal accident at a local puppet theater... But they're not the only ones who are trying to find out what's been going on.

( Master of Puppets - Chapter 4 )