Glad you liked the story and my Emma. I somehow couldn't turn her into a complete bitch. I think, even in the movie, Emma was naive for following Shaw, and she was rather opportunistic than outright mean and evil. So I enjoyed writing her as a spoiled, rich brat - definitely egoistic and egocentric but not a bad person.

I included your suggestion in the poll I made for the sequel. I wouldn't have thought of it, but I'll consider it. Just can't promise anything yet because I still have a lot of planning to do (and finish that other fic first before I start with the sequel).

Thank you for commenting :)